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Monday, August 30, 2021

Murder mistery

 Once upon a time there lived a boy but not just any boy he was the king's son that lived in the castle with his father and his mum and then one night they went out to go to a restaurant but not just any restaurant a very expensive restaurant  and the king was having a meeting with all some people idk basicle his guards but this evolved the fbi the fbi was waiting outside waiting for somebody to make a move 10 seconds later killer made a bad move and then shot the king and the king’s son was so sad that he went in there and then tried to kill the killer with his sword but then he got shot the fbi blasted down the door and then sore owned the killer and then forced him to put the gun down but he did not put the gun down he shot one of the fbi but he had bulletproof vest and then he ran into the darkness and then the ambulance came and then put the kid inside the ambulance and then takes him to the hostible and the mother was very very sad but she was happy that her son was still alive but then her son came back and her son said to her my very said that daddy died and then she laughed and laughed and laughed and then she said i got you now and then stabbed him so many times and then he fled to the ground and then laughed and then she hide the body of the boy in the clawset and then the guard came past and then opened the door to the dead body and then screamed in horror and then said there's blood everywhere and then all of the other guards came so the building was not sore rounded by guards and then she made her escape and then she was never ever seen again 


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5 comments:

  1. you spelt mystery wrong
    but it good

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  2. Hi Jordan.

    Keep up the blog posts as it is great to see you are writing at home. Next time add full stops throughout your story followed by capital letters so it helps the reader to understand the story better.

    - Miss Evans

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  3. me not like you miss evans

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